Choose the best turns, shrugs, and leaning from the Body Movements chapter of Kent and Shelton's The Romance Writer's Phrase Book

I have given these some thought, and I am going with she stopped suddenly and slowly turned in a circle because there may be some demonic possession or witchcraft involved, or at the very least something other than stumbling or being impatient.

― league of women voters, Tuesday, 27 December 2011 22:07 (5 days ago) Permalink

will anyone vote for he gave an impatient shrug? seems kinda lazy and barely distinguishable from he shrugged dismissively

― league of women voters, Tuesday, 27 December 2011 22:12 (5 days ago)

i guess we could have stopped right here

WINNER
A: NO

his gaze fell to the creamy expanse of her neck
creamy and clotted
like sour milk risen to the top
of a bulging glass
with fat thighs

there was a tingling in the pit of her stomach
deeper, too
her intestines
oh shit
the intestinal parisites were rebelling

he gave her body a raking glance
a shoveling grimace
and a chainsawing slap across the ass

something intense flared through his enchantment

hemorrhoids.