"His gaze was riveted on her face, then moved over her body slowly" - I don't know about your workmanship quality, but I expect that when something is riveted, it doesn't move, slowly or otherwise!
Soft gazes, drillbit gazes that bore into you, riveting you like plate metal... what else do gazes do?
This is such a goldmine.
― Dowr Toemm (Fotherington Thomas), Saturday, 31 December 2011 15:15 (twelve years ago) link
"he scanned her critically and beamed approval"
http://t0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcR4PYp6m7hs7wCDdf4S8BDh2a0zhUmu_H_aZwSvbu5t4gWjJrPE
― ledge, Saturday, 31 December 2011 17:21 (twelve years ago) link
He was so disturbing to her in every way. Hahahaha
― wore glasses and said things (thejenny), Saturday, 31 December 2011 17:43 (twelve years ago) link
Automatic thread bump. This poll's results are now in.
― System, Sunday, 1 January 2012 00:01 (twelve years ago) link
I have given these some thought, and I am going with she stopped suddenly and slowly turned in a circle because there may be some demonic possession or witchcraft involved, or at the very least something other than stumbling or being impatient.
― league of women voters, Tuesday, 27 December 2011 22:07 (5 days ago) Permalink
will anyone vote for he gave an impatient shrug? seems kinda lazy and barely distinguishable from he shrugged dismissively
― league of women voters, Tuesday, 27 December 2011 22:12 (5 days ago)
i guess we could have stopped right here
WINNERA: NO
― league of women voters, Sunday, 1 January 2012 01:23 (twelve years ago) link
his gaze fell to the creamy expanse of her neckcreamy and clottedlike sour milk risen to the topof a bulging glasswith fat thighs
― remy bean in exile, Sunday, 1 January 2012 02:16 (twelve years ago) link
there was a tingling in the pit of her stomachdeeper, tooher intestinesoh shitthe intestinal parisites were rebelling
he gave her body a raking glancea shoveling grimaceand a chainsawing slap across the ass
― remy bean in exile, Sunday, 1 January 2012 02:18 (twelve years ago) link
something intense flared through his enchantment hemorrhoids.
― remy bean in exile, Sunday, 1 January 2012 02:19 (twelve years ago) link