"she gave a choked, desperate laugh"
― league of women voters, Friday, 30 December 2011 21:14 (twelve years ago) link
Ewwwwwwwww― Illia Rump (emil.y), Friday, December 30, 2011 9:10 PM (4 minutes ago) Bookmark Permalink"she gave a choked, desperate laugh"― league of women voters, Friday, December 30, 2011 9:14 PM (30 seconds ago) Bookmark Permalink
― Illia Rump (emil.y), Friday, December 30, 2011 9:10 PM (4 minutes ago) Bookmark Permalink
― league of women voters, Friday, December 30, 2011 9:14 PM (30 seconds ago) Bookmark Permalink
I love how well these posts go together ;-)
― Sheaths of ClammyCloth (Fotherington Thomas), Friday, 30 December 2011 21:15 (twelve years ago) link
HIS FAT FACE MELTED INTO A BUTTERY SMILE OM NOM NOM
― wore glasses and said things (thejenny), Friday, 30 December 2011 22:17 (twelve years ago) link
* he had acquired a polished veneer
http://slurmed.com/fanart/amanda-j/009_golden-bender_by-amanda-j.gif
― Leave town with an orange, and pretend you're laughing at it. (Trayce), Friday, 30 December 2011 22:25 (twelve years ago) link
She stopped suddenly and slowly turned in a circle, her face melting into butter.
― wore glasses and said things (thejenny), Friday, 30 December 2011 22:30 (twelve years ago) link
A polished veneer of butter?
― Sheaths of ClammyCloth (Fotherington Thomas), Friday, 30 December 2011 22:34 (twelve years ago) link
Automatic thread bump. This poll is closing tomorrow.
― System, Saturday, 31 December 2011 00:01 (twelve years ago) link
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3010/2478604618_596cd50400.jpg
― thompp, Saturday, 31 December 2011 00:51 (twelve years ago) link
http://awfullibrarybooks.net/wp-content/uploads/2010/09/romancewriters-2.jpg
― league of women voters, Saturday, 31 December 2011 15:00 (twelve years ago) link
"His gaze was riveted on her face, then moved over her body slowly" - I don't know about your workmanship quality, but I expect that when something is riveted, it doesn't move, slowly or otherwise!
Soft gazes, drillbit gazes that bore into you, riveting you like plate metal... what else do gazes do?
This is such a goldmine.
― Dowr Toemm (Fotherington Thomas), Saturday, 31 December 2011 15:15 (twelve years ago) link
"he scanned her critically and beamed approval"
http://t0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcR4PYp6m7hs7wCDdf4S8BDh2a0zhUmu_H_aZwSvbu5t4gWjJrPE
― ledge, Saturday, 31 December 2011 17:21 (twelve years ago) link
He was so disturbing to her in every way. Hahahaha
― wore glasses and said things (thejenny), Saturday, 31 December 2011 17:43 (twelve years ago) link
Automatic thread bump. This poll's results are now in.
― System, Sunday, 1 January 2012 00:01 (twelve years ago) link
I have given these some thought, and I am going with she stopped suddenly and slowly turned in a circle because there may be some demonic possession or witchcraft involved, or at the very least something other than stumbling or being impatient.
― league of women voters, Tuesday, 27 December 2011 22:07 (5 days ago) Permalink
will anyone vote for he gave an impatient shrug? seems kinda lazy and barely distinguishable from he shrugged dismissively
― league of women voters, Tuesday, 27 December 2011 22:12 (5 days ago)
i guess we could have stopped right here
WINNERA: NO
― league of women voters, Sunday, 1 January 2012 01:23 (twelve years ago) link
his gaze fell to the creamy expanse of her neckcreamy and clottedlike sour milk risen to the topof a bulging glasswith fat thighs
― remy bean in exile, Sunday, 1 January 2012 02:16 (twelve years ago) link
there was a tingling in the pit of her stomachdeeper, tooher intestinesoh shitthe intestinal parisites were rebelling
he gave her body a raking glancea shoveling grimaceand a chainsawing slap across the ass
― remy bean in exile, Sunday, 1 January 2012 02:18 (twelve years ago) link
something intense flared through his enchantment hemorrhoids.
― remy bean in exile, Sunday, 1 January 2012 02:19 (twelve years ago) link